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Are you blind
 
lavendersblue Written by lavendersblue
December 21, 2009
Thanks for this review!
 
Painful
 
lavendersblue Written by lavendersblue
December 16, 2009
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you liked it!
 
Last two lines
 
lavendersblue Written by lavendersblue
November 11, 2009
Thank you for the insight, that's probably true. And thanks so much for the review!!!
 
Lovely Concept
 
jacantina Written by jacantina
October 06, 2009
Thank you Neil for your review of the poem "A Small Whisper" You are right it can be re-arranged without losing the concept and heart of the message. It was my first attempt at writing poetry from memory of 12 years ago. Again I'm grateful for your help to improve my submission. I will make changes hopeful to improve my first draft.
Kathie is a sweetheart and a great friend, I love the Lady.
~ Hugs ~
Anita
 
Period piece?
 
Beau Written by Beau
September 23, 2009
Mr. Soloneii I realize that your comments are meant to be construtive and I truly appreceate them.
This particular poem, however must stay as written because it won first prize in a poetry contest a few years back and I would not change it now.
 
Good subject
 
jacantina Written by jacantina
September 20, 2009
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September 20, 2009
I want to thank you for your honest review, I deleted my previous unkind comment, you review was fair, I made some miner changes, for the better I hope. I may not be finish with it. "a novice for life", live and learn....

Merci beaucoup
Anita
 
..lump in the throat!
 
Petit Written by Petit
September 15, 2009
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September 15, 2009
Aren't all little boys disobedient and mischievous, heheh.
They wouldn't be little boys if they weren't ;-)))

I wouldn't have disobeyed my mother for anything,
I adored and trusted her implicitly so that
anything she asked me to do...I did. Of course
she did come back as fast as her size 5's could
carry her....I had the mumps at the time...a very
funny sight :-)

Petit
 
Hussy...!
 
Petit Written by Petit
September 15, 2009
haha this is just a look at life on my part and my own interpretation of women's
naughty ways, well some of them, alledgedly ;-)

Bigger girls came ... they made me
write it

Who said that?

Petit



 
She showed no mercer..
 
Petit Written by Petit
September 15, 2009
Aha, this poem is about a very dear friend of mine who has a rather big 'pop' belly now...too many pies, tee hee.
Nonetheless I love him dearly, there's just a whole lot more to love ;-)))

Petit
 
Emotional torture...
 
Petit Written by Petit
September 15, 2009
I took the rhythm from a number the Eagles wrote .... so really it could even be lyrics. They had a hit with the particular tune I'm thinking of but again the name of it escapes me...a senior moment lol

Petit
 
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