Too scared, I guess

5.6 (1)

Written by nickkler January 30, 2010 Hits: 85 Favorites

Inside of me, there is this place

I never really go in there

Too scared, I guess

Some people are trapped in there

I hear them crying all night

Sometimes, they scream in the daylight

I have tried to open that door

With a long 6’ pole

But they never really wana come out

Too scared, I guess

Sometimes, I hear a haunting laugh

Burning of skin with a cigarette light

Then, I don’t hear them for a while

It gets really quiet inside

Someone is torturing a little child

A grown man is pleading for his life

All this is happening inside of this place

I never really go in there

Too scared, I guess

Nick Kler

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Overall rating:		5.6
Readability:		6.0 (1)
Structure:		5.0 (1)
Content:		6.0 (1)
Technical:		5.0 (1)
Emotional:		6.0 (1)

Too scared I guess

Overall rating:		5.6
Readability:		6.0
Structure:		5.0
Content:		6.0
Technical:		5.0
Emotional:		6.0

Reviewed by jacantina
February 06, 2010
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A good read, a little scary, more so if you didn't add "With a long 6'pole", remove the "never really" in "But they never really want to come out" with just "don't". Only my opinion. Keep writing.

Annie