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Poetry Lyric This one is for you, my love
 

This one is for you, my love Hot

Here is to those

That dared, my love

It was only you

That cared, for me, my love

 

Wandered the streets, so dark and alone

Abandoned by the ones, those were once really mine

Broken to the bone, I was, when you found me

You took me in and you saved, my love, my life

 

Given up all hopes, I had, to survive

It was only you that gave me back, my life

 

This one is for you, my love

I can share with, an eternal life

 

This is to the place, so dark, inside

No one ever dared to enter, I cried

It was you that caressed, you brought in the light

You cased it in silence, for me, to dream my life

 

This one is to you, my one, my love

I owe it all to you, my love, my life

 

Nick Kler

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Beautiful

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That was beautiful. Nice write.

 

Sweet

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Whoever she is,,she should enjoy this one for a Valentine..lol and God bless..Valentine