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   "Out In The Cold"

 
How many years...have I wandered alone;
Having in me the need, of finding a home.
The emptiness I feel, inside my own chest;
Lord You know...it doesn't have to be...the best.
 
I am freezing out here...lost in the cold;
Walking down streets where, none go but the bold.
Seeking to find...some help to become whole,
Wandering around blind...no help for my soul.
 
Why did I land...in this temporary maze?
I feel that I am lost, in a dark grey haze.
Please, someone tell me, or show me how;
These strteets are so weary and lonely right now?
 
I am lost out in the cold, and I still wonder why;
I was left out in this world to wander and die?
By someone...was I thrown and cast away;
Now alone forever---is that where I will stay?
 
I really need...to come in out of the cold;
I've been here so long...I must be quite old.
Will I always be wandering, walking half blind;
Is there any possibility, of life of another kind?
 
Please God help me...I'm lost and ache in this cold;
Please give me Your Hand , I need Someone to hold.

 Valentine 

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"Out In The Cold"

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My worst nightmare, homeless cold and alone. Great write, but not alone really, you are talking to Him. Thank you sweetie for sharing another great poem. God Bless

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Annie