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Valentine Written by Valentine     January 26, 2010     Hits: 104     Favorites1 Add to favorites
 



Everyday is a gift...
That is why it is called the present.
Treat it with care...
Do nothing you'll come to resent'

The time will come...
When all of our days are few.
If you have not "HIM" in the present,
Then what...will you do?

 Valentine

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"The Present"

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jacantina Reviewed by jacantina
January 26, 2010
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So right you are, without HIM we are nothing especially later. God Bless

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Annie