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The In Between Man

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wattyj1 Written by wattyj1     January 23, 2010     Hits: 93     Favorites0 Add to favorites
 

I am the in between man,

Sometimes folk think this,

As time goes by, I'm not the same,

Bold, but not as I should be,

This made me wonder who I am,

And what I'm all about.

Many times I feel it's me,

If I had my way I'd rather not,

Be different all the time,

But I must now and then be,

Straightforward as I'd like to be.

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The In Between Man

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jacantina Reviewed by jacantina
January 26, 2010
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A smooth write, good connection with the reader. Keep practicing and you will become as straightforward as you want to be. I like it.Thank you for sharing.

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Annie

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Hi Annie,
Thanks for your review on The in between man. I am pleased you have reviewed my work. We all need something to help to continue composing poems. Being a member of a writers group has helped me very much and I have improved very much since joining.
Thanks once again,
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Wattyj1